by JHern » Mon Apr 16, 2012 1:44 pm
Wow, nice production quality.
One thing I would change is all the background music and driving around in a car and other movement and stuff going on while talking about "the most important part of putting..." It distracts from that main, critical, point. It is much better to fade to black, stop the music, and inscribe the words across the screen as they are spoken by Jussi, and then drive it home with a close-up shot of the hit point.
Current bag...
Distance Drivers: Barsby Boatman, Glow Champion Katana
Fairway Drivers: Pinnacle Rival, Icon Patriot, Protege Rival, Elite-X Cyclone
Mid-Range: Ghost/Wasp, Z Buzzz/DGA Squall, Z Glide
Putt/Approach: Star Classic Roc, Icon Clutch, Protege Clutch